Attached is the video of my second elevator pitch. In this pitch, I took into consideration the advice that I received from my first elevator pitch. I didn't receive a ton of advice from my first pitch so it was hard for me to make adjustments to my work based off of the feedback. Any detailed feedback with regard to this elevator pitch will be greatly appreciated. Feel free to also compare it to my first pitch if you would like.
I hope that the way I recorded it is not considered as using a WebCam. I did my best to be dynamic with the recording as instructed.
https://youtu.be/PH1IwYql1aM
Reece,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch for your business is done very well and easily gets the point across to the person that you are pitching to. It was good to see a video for the second one as it allows us to see what kind of mannerisms you express while speaking on camera. I think what piece of feedback that you should look into is to expressing more emotion during your pitch. I think it'll help in the long run to show that you are passionate about what you are pitching and committed to your business opportunity.